skills post 2

paraphrase
In the Yellowstone national park,it's more possible to drown than to be attacked by a bear.
Between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died because of the drowning in the water.
However, only 5 people were killed by bear attacks.
Summarizing
When people go swimming, they may have fear of being attacked by a shark.
However, it's highly unlikely.
It's more likely that you will be struck by lightning and drown.
However,there are several ways to reduce the chances to attacked by a shark.
Traveling in groups is a good way and if you have a cut,you should not swim in the open ocean.